Day 23

I Love Lucy in the Kitchen

A  delicious dessert was being made,

And the graham crackers were already laid,

All left to do was whip the cream

And chocolate would be added in a stream.

I couldn’t wait to put it all together.

Whir, whir the bowl does swirl

When suddenly a glitch appears

And chocolate cream was sprayed

Sprayed from head to toe,

From cupboard to stove!

Our treat would have to wait…

5 thoughts on “Day 23

  1. Such a delightful poem! Love the title, the scene it describes, and the rhythm. Very well done and fun to read!

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  2. As soon as I saw the title, I knew I had to read the poem. Oh, now I loved that show. Oh, how many times I’ve been down that road. And oh, how I laughed reading your poem!

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  3. Oh wow! And you were able to step back and write about it! Like Roseblatt’s Reader Response Theory says, we make meaning from our experiences as we work through understanding writing. As I read your work I thought about how much perspective plays a role in how we live. The message for me is that the beauty and the mess are all a part of our lives and that’s okay. Sometimes gratification is delayed. And that is okay.


  4. Sounds like the right ingredients for a memory. Very whimsical!


  5. LOOoo-SEEee! I can picture this delicious disaster. Thanks for capturing it in verse.


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